Friday, September 11, 2009

Koi Tumse Puche Kaun Hoon Main? Tum Kah Dena....!!



Koi tumse puche kaun hoon main, Tum keh dena koi khaas nahi.
Ek dost hai kaccha pakka sa, Ek jhooth hai aadha saccha sa.
Jazbaat ko dhake ek parda bas, Ek bahana hai accha sa.
Jeevan ka ek aisa saathi hai, Jo pass ho ke bhi pass nahi.
Koi tumse puche kaun hoon main, Tum keh dena koi khaas nahi.
Hawa ka ek suhana jhonka hai, Kabhi nazuk toh kabhi tufaano sa.
Chehra dekh kar jo nazrein jhuka le, Kabhi apna toh kabhi begaano sa.
Zindgi ka ek aisa humsafar, Jo samandar hai, par dil ko pyaas nahi.
Koi tumse puche kaun hoon main, Tum keh dena koi khaas nahi.
Ek saathi jo ankahi kuch baatein keh jaata hai, Yaadon me jiska ek dhundhla chehra reh jaata hai.
Yuh toh uske na hone ka kuch gam nahi, Par kabhi-kabhi aankho se ansu ban ke beh jaata hai.
Yuh rehta toh mere tassavur me hai, Par in aankho ko uski talaash nahi.
Koi tumse puche kaun hoon main, Tum keh dena koi khaas nahi!!!
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18 comments:

  1. sunnyOctober 5, 2009 at 5:20 AM

    nice sharyi yaar keep it up

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    1. ASHISH PANCHBHAIMarch 1, 2020 at 12:49 PM

      I med this on 2003
      And post on my Orkut account 2003

      Delete
    2. ASHISH PANCHBHAIMarch 1, 2020 at 12:53 PM

      I write this poetry on 2002 and post my Orkut account on 2003
      I don't want to blame anyone because I don't have any proof,

      But I am happy my composed copied by so many people and its published

      Thank you everyone to appreciate my poetry

      Delete
  2. UnknownNovember 4, 2009 at 10:39 PM

    Hi friend i like ur shayari because someone is there who hurts me

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    1. ASHISH PANCHBHAIMarch 1, 2020 at 12:53 PM

      I write this poetry on 2002 and post my Orkut account on 2003
      I don't want to blame anyone because I don't have any proof,

      But I am happy my composed copied by so many people and its published

      Thank you everyone to appreciate my poetry

      Delete
  3. UnknownNovember 4, 2009 at 10:40 PM

    but i am not a boy i am a girl this is my bros account

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  4. Chanchal SinghNovember 21, 2009 at 4:01 AM

    Hey rakesh u told u r not a boy u r a girl.... and u have some problem.... so i would like to help you can you give your personal email id??

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    1. ASHISH PANCHBHAIMarch 1, 2020 at 12:53 PM

      I write this poetry on 2002 and post my Orkut account on 2003
      I don't want to blame anyone because I don't have any proof,

      But I am happy my composed copied by so many people and its published

      Thank you everyone to appreciate my poetry

      Delete
  5. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2011 at 3:11 AM

    by chance i came to ur blog , but after reading ur posts . i felt miracles hppend by chance only , its my good luck only that i got ur blog , plz keep writing...

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    1. ASHISH PANCHBHAIMarch 1, 2020 at 12:51 PM

      I write this poetry on 2002 and post my Orkut account on 2003
      I don't want to blame anyone because I don't have any proof,

      But I am happy my composed copied by so many people and its published

      Thank you everyone to appreciate my poetry

      Delete
  6. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    awesome yaar
    really close 2 my hearimbotin

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  7. sweetheartJanuary 11, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    Bhai its a very heart touching story litteraly a one of my favorite

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    1. ASHISH PANCHBHAIMarch 1, 2020 at 12:52 PM

      I write this poetry on 2002 and post my Orkut account on 2003
      I don't want to blame anyone because I don't have any proof,

      But I am happy my composed copied by so many people and its published

      Thank you everyone to appreciate my poetry

      Delete
  8. UnknownJune 15, 2016 at 3:09 PM

    Ap khaas bn gye ho!

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    1. ASHISH PANCHBHAIMarch 1, 2020 at 12:52 PM

      I write this poetry on 2002 and post my Orkut account on 2003
      I don't want to blame anyone because I don't have any proof,

      But I am happy my composed copied by so many people and its published

      Thank you everyone to appreciate my poetry

      Delete
  9. ASHISH PANCHBHAIMarch 1, 2020 at 12:52 PM

    I write this poetry on 2002 and post my Orkut account on 2003
    I don't want to blame anyone because I don't have any proof,

    But I am happy my composed copied by so many people and its published

    Thank you everyone to appreciate my poetry

    ReplyDelete
  10. ASHISH PANCHBHAIMarch 1, 2020 at 12:54 PM

    I write this poetry on 2002 and post my Orkut account on 2003
    I don't want to blame anyone because I don't have any proof,

    But I am happy my composed copied by so many people and its published

    Thank you everyone to appreciate my poetry

    ReplyDelete